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Friday, 15 May 2015

100 Word Challenge

This week we have been 100 word challenge. Check mine out!

WALT write a descriptive story in only 100 words!
The 100 word challenge is a challenge to write a whole story in only 100 words! You can check how many words you have written by highlighting your writing and pressing Ctrl, Shift, C at the same time. Good luck!
Make sure you think about your story and read it to yourself when you have finished to check it is as good as it can be!
Your prompt this week is:
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I will be successful when:
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I have used 100 words

my writing makes sense

have at least 1 complex sentence

have used full stops and capital letters, and one other form of punctuation (! , “ “ )



First use the complex sentence planner to start your writing.
Begin writing here:
The girl was breathless because she thought the eagle was going to nibble her.The girl  wanted to scream so that people  can hear her screaming.Then the eagle said ‘‘don’t be scared’’ he said softly.After the eagle had told the girl not to be scared, the girl realised that the eagle is just helping her.She was grateful that the eagle is just helping and not eating her..”Beep beep beeeeeep’’my alarm rang as I looked at the clock and the time was 7:00 so  I went back to bed.Carooooo are you ready yet”?Mum yelled.

1 comment:

  1. Hi Toto,

    I loved reading your 100 word challenge. Did you find it hard to write a whole story in only 100 words? When I am doing the 100 WC I find I have to choose my ideas very carefully.

    I look forward to seeing more of your learning on your blog.
    Mrs Archer

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